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Anonymous
07-30-2002, 06:01 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-30-2002/10345_P7300042.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Along The Coast
Year Created: 2000
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 12 x 16
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This painting was inspired by photos and vacations to Cape Cod and Rockport.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
What could be done to improve the composition? Should more color have been introduced around the lobster traps?

aspybey
07-30-2002, 07:58 PM
I think this is beautiful, but if I were to critique anything about it, maybe add some shadows behind the lobster traps or highlights on the tops and the log laying on the deck to show where the light source is coming from. Otherwise however, I really like this painting, the colors in the sky are wonderful and your sense of detail is great!

drquinn
07-30-2002, 09:08 PM
As above plus show some three dimentional work to the house.