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07-29-2002, 11:11 PM
Year Created: 2002
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MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
all comments/critiques welcome...
07-30-2002, 10:17 AM
I really like this alot
the colors are grand
really like the beach side
and their shadows
the color variations working
the water side
though the colors are perfect
they need some working
to form the water
*the waves' sides (whites) into the rest of the water.
*more of those deeper colors smooshed under the cup of wave.
*where the water meets the beach...too abrupt
and that wave needs more variation in width
like you have more of at the top
I understand that these are small laps...
(and I can hear them...wish I was there...)
just tweek the water a bit and you have it!
you have a great feeling going on here
very interesting perspective/ composition
and, like I said...I love the colors
indicating that peaceful time of day...
07-30-2002, 10:37 AM
Nice. Love the sand and the grasses. Need to soften the waters edge and froth it up a little with highlights and shadows. A little more colour to the water too perhaps........... mmmmmm......feel that sun.:D
07-30-2002, 12:07 PM
Thank you both for your input, I will work on the water/waves!
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