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aspybey
07-29-2002, 11:11 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-29-2002/11273_peaceful.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Peaceful
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 12X16
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
comments...

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
all comments/critiques welcome...

giniaad
07-30-2002, 10:17 AM
I really like this alot
the colors are grand

really like the beach side
grasses etc
and their shadows
the color variations working

the water side
though the colors are perfect
they need some working
to form the water
*the waves' sides (whites) into the rest of the water.
*more of those deeper colors smooshed under the cup of wave.
*where the water meets the beach...too abrupt
and that wave needs more variation in width
like you have more of at the top
I understand that these are small laps...
(and I can hear them...wish I was there...)
just tweek the water a bit and you have it!
IMHO

you have a great feeling going on here
very interesting perspective/ composition
and, like I said...I love the colors
indicating that peaceful time of day...

Pam B.
07-30-2002, 10:37 AM
Nice. Love the sand and the grasses. Need to soften the waters edge and froth it up a little with highlights and shadows. A little more colour to the water too perhaps........... mmmmmm......feel that sun.:D

aspybey
07-30-2002, 12:07 PM
Thank you both for your input, I will work on the water/waves!