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ExpressiveAngie
09-17-2008, 06:11 PM
:wave:
is the crop too tight?
acrylic on canvas paper 10x12

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/17-Sep-2008/29518-mechelledd.jpg

Linee
09-17-2008, 06:22 PM
Love the crop, colors, and style! Don't know her, but I would bet that you really captured her "essence" with this.

howyadoin
09-17-2008, 07:27 PM
Not at all. It's a great crop.

MrsG_SoCal
09-17-2008, 08:40 PM
Love this - love your style!

susme48
09-17-2008, 09:29 PM
I like it!

amotwell
09-17-2008, 11:04 PM
Crop looks great, as does the rest!

Bizkit
09-17-2008, 11:41 PM
Hey, I remeber you!!!!!

Great job with this, I love the colors and the hair is really cool. Youve got about 600 pages of catching up to do so get busy!!!!

Good to see ya back!

ExpressiveAngie
09-18-2008, 07:35 AM
Hey, I remeber you!!!!!

Great job with this, I love the colors and the hair is really cool. Youve got about 600 pages of catching up to do so get busy!!!!

Good to see ya back!
:eek:
lol, Mike school is in session and the kiddos are back in a routine, it sure does help me to find time to paint and hang out with yall.

Thanks everyone, I will deliver it today.

OkeeKat
09-18-2008, 10:04 AM
Wonderful Angie!! Love your style and her hair its great.. fantastic colors in the skintones..Just right on too!!

Lulu
09-18-2008, 04:46 PM
Great crop Angie, a lovely portrait of a lovely girl.
My only nit is the teeth on our left. I'd like to see a tiny bit of shading (as you have done on our right) to curve the teeth back behind the lip. At the moment the teeth on that side appear to be sitting on the lip instead of behind.

Charlie's Mum
09-18-2008, 05:56 PM
She's lovely Angie and you've done a good job - just hope you do as Lulu suggests about the teeth.
Love the crop and boy is your style maturing beautifully! :heart:

ExpressiveAngie
09-18-2008, 06:12 PM
Great crop Angie, a lovely portrait of a lovely girl.
My only nit is the teeth on our left. I'd like to see a tiny bit of shading (as you have done on our right) to curve the teeth back behind the lip. At the moment the teeth on that side appear to be sitting on the lip instead of behind.
done :thumbsup: thanks!

I appreciate everyone's input - thanks so much:heart:

loobyteacher
09-19-2008, 11:11 AM
well done! The colors are great and the composition is dynamic. My only critique is the highlight on the eyes. It is not in the same place on the pupil and it appears to make her eye seem like a lazy eye. If the photo shows it that way I understand, but it just makes me uncomfortable to look at her eyes.

zoropb
09-19-2008, 11:56 AM
Very nice job all the way around.

Sergio

Lady Carol
09-19-2008, 12:45 PM
Beautiful.

amaze_1101
09-19-2008, 05:07 PM
WOW fabulous style and such a striking pose. Great use of colour too. A nice confident work full of life.

ExpressiveAngie
09-19-2008, 05:14 PM
Thank you Elaine, Carol, Sergio and loobyteacher :heart:

giddy up
09-19-2008, 05:25 PM
I love the crop......very nice.......good work

Greg :)

CamiTampa
09-20-2008, 12:43 AM
is the crop too tight?
No way. This is a wonderful portrait. I like your palette.
Cami

Nitsa
09-20-2008, 10:47 AM
Angie this is fabulous. I love the crop. :clap:

TxAggieDarlin
09-20-2008, 11:09 AM
I wish I could do people....that is really great

Dewi
09-20-2008, 12:13 PM
Hi Angie, lovely portrait, crop and palette.