View Full Version : to the extreme

08-31-2008, 05:07 PM
i've been foolin with this a couple days
i've been fooling with brush strokes, lines, plastic, foil
not sure if it works or not
if not please be http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/31-Aug-2008/23418-cardinal.jpg honest

chammi kaiser
08-31-2008, 05:12 PM
Looks like some really good textures there but it is very dark and difficult to see - looks like a bird on a tree branch and I am sure once it is a little more lit up, it will look great.

08-31-2008, 05:52 PM
Looks great. I really like the look of the bird. Where did the foil end up?

08-31-2008, 06:03 PM
this is great!! I think the background top is a tad bit too dark.. the dark part of the cardinal is blending in the dark folage. Lighter tones on both would realy make him pop out!

08-31-2008, 06:18 PM
I like this!!!

08-31-2008, 07:11 PM
I really like this, but the way I am reading it, is the bird is in front of the branch...not really on it. I love the textures but the way the bird is doesn't seem right.

08-31-2008, 08:45 PM
hey all- ty for your eyes- i've been workingonhimallday
with the foil-i balled it up and used it as a stamp...i also dipped some paint in the edges of foil to make thin lines
so here is the update


08-31-2008, 09:24 PM
Looks good but the opposite colors (green and red) both being almost the same darkness (background and bird) it sort of gets lost.
I am adding a greyscale to show you the contrast.
Maybe make the background a lighter shade or the bird to make one stand out more if thats what your after.
I also did a crappy contrast on the colors (background) I am work and they don't allow photoshop so I did what I could with what I got here lol.
It does look good though :)

09-01-2008, 02:37 AM
:thumbsup: Great job!!!

09-01-2008, 10:17 AM
:wave: Hi Mz!

It IS working, in my opinion. The background has a beautiful spontaneity to it. You have such a great natural ability for drama and interest in your work. If I would make a suggestion, it would be to take your most prominent flick of light and move it just behind the bird. It would illuminate just enough of it to make it the focal. :D


09-01-2008, 11:36 AM
Looking great!

09-01-2008, 01:33 PM
dead- bizkit , gurly and ed ty all
edtree thanks for yur comments- i was on the verge of chunking this one- i get ideas in my head - start to execute- then i get so darn frustrated sometimes i just want to throw it all awy
-i'll repost him- it may be few days on it because i have to put my thinking cap on