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billycat
08-30-2008, 03:33 PM
Acylics on 12 x 16 Paper.
I do not like at all the pears. The grey on the pears makes them look so ugly. What do you think if I replace the yellow -> grey to yellow -> brown?

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/30-Aug-2008/131167-IMG_2063.jpg

HOllyLL
08-30-2008, 07:10 PM
I'd either use blue or purple for shadows, and you can add some to the grapes (and between places)_ too! And I think more orange (vs just brown, since it' s almost opposite the purple on the color wheel) would be a great touch! Not bad..don't give up..I ALWAYS resurrect a painting or 2! here's what I mean, as shown (crudely!) in photoshop..hope this helps!
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/30-Aug-2008/95500-grapespears.jpg

edtree
08-30-2008, 09:46 PM
:wave: Hi Billy!

Maybe try blending the transition areas a little more. To me, the shadow colors didn't look bad at all! It's a sweet painting! :D

Elizabeth