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Anonymous
07-23-2002, 02:51 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
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GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: And A Glass Of Wine
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Board
Dimension: 16
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
none

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I know the flowers are pretty sad. I would like your views on the background and the glass before I tackle the flowers again.

JustjoGA
07-23-2002, 04:09 AM
Since I am a red glass collector, the glass caught my eye first thing. Great shape and highlighting, but isn't it listing a little to the right? I also think the background could be lightened a little on the left side of the glass to make it stand out....

Paintonbrush
07-23-2002, 11:53 AM
Your stem is wonderful. the listing, I dont see that, but agree about the left background a little lighter (our monitors see so many different ways, could be that too)
Keep working at it, in a peaceful way, and you will get there.

artinoils
07-24-2002, 05:51 PM
Composition has interesting textures. The light source is confusing to me. The glass shape is well done but it looks opaque or like a dark color glass. Love the stone slab under the rose and glass.

jerryW
07-24-2002, 07:53 PM
the cup is like a dart that has pierced the heart of the rose in this composition, but noone can complain about the rendering.
the darks and lights

orchidlover6
07-25-2002, 11:23 AM
the glass is wonderfully done. I don't see any listing. I love how the goblet appears out of the darkness. Gives it intrigue.