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Bill Linn
08-22-2008, 01:27 PM
9X16 Canvas - Still in the works.. Trying to figure out the light coming in the doorway.. I'm sure some of you know the effect I'm trying for, suggestions please.

The reference came from a b&w snapshot.

Thanks.http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/22-Aug-2008/91502-IMG_3885.jpg

debee
08-22-2008, 04:16 PM
Cute painting and I really like the effect you have on the door. Not sure how to help you with the lighting question except maybe you could post your ref. photo to give us a better idea.

susme48
08-22-2008, 05:31 PM
What a doll!

OkeeKat
08-22-2008, 06:34 PM
Great so far Bill.. I would make it much more yellow/gold especialy on the hardwood floor, Maybe a touch of gold on the wall !! this is going to be great!!

edtree
08-23-2008, 08:24 AM
:wave: This is really wonderful, Bill!

I think what you might want to do with the sream of light from the opened door is up the contrast and sharpen the lines between light and dark. Take a look at some of Coralie's work to see some good examples of what I mean:
Coarlie's Uncle Aurthur Painting. (http://www.wetcanvas.com/forums/showthread.php?t=503891&page=2)
Coralie's Good Morning Sunshine painting. (http://www.wetcanvas.com/forums/showthread.php?t=500416)
The first one is more like your scene, but the shadows and contrasts in both, I believe, is the effect you're shooting for.

I look forward to seeing the finished work! :D

Elizabeth

sonita
08-23-2008, 12:14 PM
Unfortunately I can't give you any suggestions ...I always need to see some kinda ref :) but I still wanted to let you know that I think this coming along really good...I like what you have done so far! Looking forward to to final version
Soni