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Spyderbabe
04-20-2008, 12:17 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-20-2008/23281_artist_studio.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Artist Still Life
Year Created: 2008
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 2.5 x 3.5
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
a made up scene

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
anything

lunchbox
04-20-2008, 01:49 PM
I think of your three most current, the sunflowers hit home. Your colors are amazing. In this one, my eye leads in from one corner and then unfortunately zooms out too soon toward the upper right even though the brushes are blurred. The idea is a good one, worth experimenting some more.

maw-t
04-20-2008, 01:49 PM
I am attracted most by the freedom & loosness of this.. ALso that you did this from your head.. maybe that is why it looks so free & fresh!

tgsloth
04-20-2008, 03:27 PM
Grade A
A few more brushstrokes in the triangular white mass at the bottom could raise the grade to A+. Is it snow, by the way?

tony1
04-20-2008, 06:24 PM
Nice one Spyderbabe. Very interesting. So much in a small space, nice.

Spyderbabe
04-21-2008, 03:04 PM
HI Lunchbox, now I see the strong diagonal ...corner to corner.... I will try this again, larger.
maw-t - thank you. It was fast ;-)
TG - The white mass, no doubt caused by snow blindness, was my reason for this piece.... trying to remember whatever I once knew about saving the whites, etc.
Thanks Tony!