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goby
03-26-2008, 07:37 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/03-26-2008/131293_IMG_6580.JPG



GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Poppy Waltz
Year Created: 2008
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Just completed this painting. The reason so many buds are on the edge of the canvas is because its a gallery-wrap and I needed to put something on the sides.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Any comments/suggestions?

Barbie Bud
03-26-2008, 11:42 PM
This is really lovely and very well done. I see the light and shadows on the blooms and the only thing that might improve it is to also see a bit more shadow and light on the leaves. Just a thought. Barb

MRSBB
03-27-2008, 12:35 AM
Hi Goby and welcome. You have a lovely poppy painting. I do think a little more color variation in the leaves would make the flowers stand out more. Very good job.........Lenore