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literal
06-28-2002, 08:36 PM
Hi everyone

This is the second acrylic painting that I gave painted having recently made a transition from Watercolour.

I'd appreciate any thoughts, comments, feedback.

The painting is Acrylic on MDF (masonite for Americans) approximately 300x400 mm using Pebeo Artists Acrylic paints.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/28-Jun-2002/Pahau-acr1.JPG

Mark

Drumbeat-trish
06-28-2002, 09:03 PM
I like this ! Great colours and great job on the water :)

gnu
06-28-2002, 10:09 PM
Hi Literal from another Wellingtonian...area anyway!!
You've captured the estuary grasses, and the mood of this place. the clouds are very realistic...!!:clap: :clap: :clap:
IMO I find my eye wanting to focus on something, but everything is out of focus, if you see what I mean,...I don't know, maybe a blade of grass or two detailed????
Just my opinion...depends what effect you were after anyway...your painting..:)

literal
06-29-2002, 01:58 AM
Thanks for the positive feedback. The digital camera I own is a cheapie and tends to make things appear a little out-of-focus but you are right... something vertical to hold the eye wouldn't go astray.

I'll give it some thought.

Mark

mf.sutton
06-29-2002, 05:06 AM
this is a very good composition, the out of focus photo doesnt help but overall a very good painting, great water - mike

orchidlover6
06-29-2002, 10:24 PM
another well done. your colors and water are great. you've done a good job transitioning from watercolors to acrylics