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K Taylor-Green
12-31-2007, 04:13 PM
Haven't done one of these in ages! But here is what I have of Lola so far. She is a beautiful yellow Lab who belongs to an online friend of mine in So Cal.
I am pretty happy with the background, but hey, if something jumps out, let me know!
It is on velour paper starting with Rembrants. I am also using Geraults, Nupastels, and Schminkes.http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/31-Dec-2007/41107-Lola2-2.jpg http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/31-Dec-2007/41107-Lolas_eye-2.jpg
A close up of the eye.

mrking
12-31-2007, 04:24 PM
The ears look so soft.... :)

Where is my popcorn?

Paula Ford
12-31-2007, 04:26 PM
Oh this is going to be so beautiful. Kate, I also love the colors in the background!!

Paula

WC Lee
12-31-2007, 04:43 PM
looking good :)

bluefish
12-31-2007, 04:53 PM
Woof, Woof (wonderful,marvelous)!!!!!

This is going to be a five milk bone painting!

Happy New Year - 'blue....':wave:

tsumeb
12-31-2007, 05:22 PM
Great start Kate. He looks like a wise old dog!
Just as a little "nitpick," I wonder if the composition would be better if some of background wasn't there. Only because I'm a troublemaker (http://www.wetcanvas.com/forums/images/smilies/lol5.gif) . . . I tried a crop. What the heck?

David


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/31-Dec-2007/46543-41107-Lola2-3.jpg

binkie
12-31-2007, 05:36 PM
Wonderful beginning. I look forward to the finished painting.

binkie

bnoonan
12-31-2007, 07:25 PM
Oh this is starting out stunning. Can't wait to sit - like a good dog... and patiently wait for the next "treat".

B

David Patterson
12-31-2007, 07:28 PM
This is looking very fine! Can't wait to see it finished.

David

water girl
12-31-2007, 08:03 PM
OK, I'm sitting back and waiting to see more. This is a fine start. Thank you for the close up of the eye. It is remarkable. :clap:

PaulaT
12-31-2007, 08:38 PM
This is going to be beautiful!!!! I will be watching and learning

K Taylor-Green
12-31-2007, 09:20 PM
Thanks everyone!
LOL David, you could be right on the crop. Make it more about Lola!
Hope to have more tomorrow evening.

sielograms
12-31-2007, 09:39 PM
What a wonderful start, this will be fun to watch!
Sharon

Donna T
12-31-2007, 10:13 PM
I love the colors in the background! This is going to be beautiful.

Donna

Ceci
01-01-2008, 03:12 PM
being a yellow lab enthusiastic an haven done so many, I think this is GREAT. love the bg, and cant wait to see more on this one.
ceci

ElsieH
01-01-2008, 09:48 PM
:clap: :clap: :clap: Great start! I love the eyes! Dog's eyes are so wonderftul by nature and you certainly capture that spirit! I'll be checking back to see more! Keep us posted! :wave:

Frances Obie
01-02-2008, 08:41 AM
I agree that this is going to be a beautiful picture.
I don't think you should make any decisions about cropping until you are nearly finished.
Frances

Orchidacea
01-02-2008, 09:27 AM
Beautiful! Love the bg, it looks like a watercolor.

K Taylor-Green
01-02-2008, 09:57 AM
I had hoped to have more done on this today, but weather related problems are keeping me from my easel!

Pat Isaac
01-02-2008, 04:56 PM
This is a wonderful start, Kate. Pulling up a chair. I too love the background.

Pat

K Taylor-Green
01-06-2008, 06:05 PM
An update on Lola! The facial structure is starting to take shape and the other eye is almost done. I can see her Therapy Dog tag isn't round enough.http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/06-Jan-2008/41107-Lola_update.jpg
The left ear, our right side has more folds and detail than the other!
C&C welcome!

K Taylor-Green
01-08-2008, 02:33 PM
Finished the portrait of Lola! I had an awful time making out the parts of the collar under her chin. Straps and buckles elude me. That is why I paint most of my horses naked!:D
Anyway, if anything jumps out let me know. I always welcome critiques!http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/08-Jan-2008/41107-LOLA-finished3.jpg

LoreneT
01-08-2008, 03:12 PM
That's a great picture! I absolutely love the background and might have to steal that idea in the future! :)

C&C: the therapy dog tag has no highlights, is it flat yellow in real life or is it golden? If it's metallic, you might want to add some highlight in white. Same for the chain it's on, if that's silver chain you might want to add a highlight to indicate that it's metallic.

Good work!

Ceci
01-08-2008, 03:32 PM
Katherine, this is a fantastic work. I have 3 labs, 2 Lolas and a male. When I looked at the finished there ar two little things I see can make it better.
One is the pink between the nose and the hair right over it, just where the pink on the top ends. It would look nicer if it blends a bit, kind of looks like its another part of the body but it actually blends with the hairs.
Two is just a tini bit of more shadow right under her mouth, where it already has a bit of black but at first it needs more definition to show that the mouth is not that big or that the hairs are not a bear I hope I made myself understood. If my english was better, maybe you would understand me . I dont know how to work on paintshop or how to put those lines some people use to show us where there is a need for change.
I hate doing this, I dont like to make you feel Im a "know it all", as a matter of fact, i kind of think twice before i make any comments, I only comment when I feel I can help in a humble way. I really appreciate when things are pointed to me, I sometimes dont see all the little bits myself,
Sorry if you dont like my comments but the only thing im quite sure of myself are yellow labs, they even sleep with me !!.
I havent posted all my lab portraits here.
By the way, love the bg. its my kind of background, lots of colors.
ceci

Pat Isaac
01-08-2008, 04:15 PM
Absolutely stunning, Kate. Color, expression and detail are perfect.

Pat

Orchidacea
01-08-2008, 04:33 PM
wow, Kate, that's just gorgeous!! Love the colors and the composition--the background works beautifully.

Kathryn Wilson
01-08-2008, 06:15 PM
:clap: :clap: :clap:

I missed the beginning of this - but being here at the end counts doesn't it! :D

Wonderful portrait! you certainly have a way with animals!

Donna T
01-08-2008, 06:54 PM
Lola turned out beautifully, Kate! It was so nice to watch the steps you took - thanks for doing this as a WIP.

Donna

cal studio
01-08-2008, 06:57 PM
Wonderful portrait- so realistic. He seems like such a beautiful animal.

Cathleen

maggie latham
01-08-2008, 07:36 PM
:) Kate,
Lola is beautiful! Thank you for sharing your WIP…fascinating to watch.
Maggie

Gail V
01-08-2008, 08:08 PM
Awesome - the fur is fabulous--I especially like how you rendered the folds in the shadow..he looks very soft!!!! Beautiful work!

Tracy Lang
01-08-2008, 08:15 PM
She is just beautiful...her fur looks so soft and bright and I love her eyes!!!

Tracy

K Taylor-Green
01-08-2008, 09:24 PM
Cece, no! That is fine! Critiquing other's work helps us all to learn to do better. Thanks for pointing out what I didn't see.

Lorene, I think it was a plastic disk. There are no highlights in the ref photo. But the ring it is on could be punched up. Thanks!

And thanks to everyone who took the time to look and comment.

maw-t
01-08-2008, 09:38 PM
I wat to reach out and touch that fur.. Really nice!

Karen Margulis
01-09-2008, 07:50 AM
Beautiful painting of Lola!! And I love the backgrund too. Thanks for sharing your WIP.

Karen

purpleheather
01-10-2008, 09:38 AM
Can't wait to see it finished - those lovely eyes - amazing.

Anne

Dougwas
01-10-2008, 12:01 PM
Thanks for the WIP Kate. Very good job. I love the fur.

Doug

Colorix
01-10-2008, 02:01 PM
Very fine dog, love how you did the fur! And thank you so much for WIPping the process! Love to watch.!