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thomas w
12-24-2007, 04:55 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-24-2007/95987_img37.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: B&W Couple
Year Created: 2007
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16 x 20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Photo a friend had me do for the couples wedding present.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Anything.

Linee
12-24-2007, 06:01 PM
Nice composition and painting. Range of values are wonderful. The only things that jump out at me is the darkest shadow under her jaw, it may be a bit too dark, and the man's forearms don't seem quite right if you compare them.

This is going to make a great gift!

creodont
12-24-2007, 07:26 PM
Hi Thomas the grey scale is fantastic well done.............

Corby
12-24-2007, 09:04 PM
yes, beautiful gray scale. But the guys right arm and leg would be verrrrry long!

ejtupi
12-24-2007, 09:08 PM
Something seems off in the size of the girl's hands, or in the angle of the left hand. Also, her face seems a bit planar. The guy's left arm seems tubelike. Other than those nitpicks, I think you've created a gift they'll remember for a lifetime. I really enjoy the setting for this portrait.

La_
12-25-2007, 03:14 AM
wonderful composition, liking that alot, and i love monochromes

definitely the guys right arm/leg (our left) need to be sucked up towards his body and you've got lots of room to scooch things ... good job really, quite nice indeed

la

andersonscott
12-25-2007, 11:26 AM
This is an excellent composition. The bottom one third of the painting is really well done - the section of her shoes and rocks:clap:

You should be very pleased with this:thumbsup:

osidianrose
12-26-2007, 09:25 PM
How old is the couple. They look so young.