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doodledee
12-17-2007, 10:52 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-17-2007/99195_koi4.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-17-2007/99195_Monday.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Koi
Year Created: 2007
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 12 x 12
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
RIL image used as reference, contributed by Mchew, Thank you Mchew. (2nd image posted, like you couldn't tell)

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
This was posted in WIP a while ago. Decided to resurrect and finish. Please let me know if you see any areas for improvement. Thanks for looking, De

billmahler
12-18-2007, 11:04 AM
Good colors and brush work.
This one is finished, I think.
Keep painting, Dee

John Jaster
12-18-2007, 05:43 PM
I like this a lot and you did a great job on the fish.

A minor point is the water is kind of a standard out of the tube blue and I actually like the blackishness of the source photo, or instead if the blue had more variation. No biggie though.

doodledee
12-18-2007, 07:52 PM
Thank you Bill
John Jaster, Thank you and that's funny, it's not an out of the tube blue. There's a whole bunch of other stuff thrown in there.
Just out of curiosity, which out of the tube blue do you think it is? Perhaps I need to disguise the blue more.