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smad3
12-16-2007, 02:26 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-16-2007/89075_IMG_0051_edited.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-16-2007/89075_IMG_0006_edited.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-16-2007/89075_IMG_0008_edited.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Can I tell you a secret
Year Created: 2007
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 12 x 16
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Not sure where else to post the images of people scenes. <br>The first one is Mom and Daughter on the lawn in a park in the Lower Mainland, BC. (12 x 16 oil on board)<br>The second is a Mom and Daughter in a row boat looking out at something (you can't see what it is, but it was a whale, I know cause I was there) in the Ocean (16" x 20 oil on canvas) and the last painting is of a couple of kids lurking around an old fisherman (12 x 16 oil on board). <br>All images caught on a camera last summer.<br><br>

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Would like to see if any one likes this stuff<br>Comments welcome.

smad3
12-16-2007, 02:31 AM
I have to say that the colour of the skin in the post is way off.
Indoor Lighting.
Much better irl.

ejtupi
12-16-2007, 04:48 AM
I wish the photo for the first picture was a bit clearer. The second picture is incredible in its realism and your treatment of the light on the figures. The third has a great composition, and the story told by the painting is tremendous.

It's great to see your work!

ArtBlogerKO
12-16-2007, 06:49 AM
I really like the second one. Mother and daughter....its touching. Is it for sale?

billmahler
12-16-2007, 09:17 AM
Good paintings!
I hope you'll be showing more

MRSBB
12-16-2007, 11:21 AM
These are all good Paintings, I especially like the 2nd one, but can relate to all of them......Nice work............Lenore

Colorix
12-16-2007, 06:29 PM
I like that stuff! Especially the second one, it is well executed, and simple and clean, and evocative -- what are they looking at? Well, you told, but that one would sell before you got it hanging straight on the wall!

The third is quite similar, but with a closer crop, and it tells a story, and the kids are so very typical of kids. This one is lovely and fun.

The first is sweet and intimate, but does not catch my fancy as much as the others.

laudesan
12-16-2007, 10:16 PM
It is a shame the pics are bigger so we can see them better, as these works look really good..

The first one brings back memories of making daisy chains.

The second one really appeals to me.. I can put myself into that painting as I have been there and done that.

The third one evokes fun..

JJ

LGHumphrey
12-17-2007, 01:58 PM
I agree with everyone else--the second one is extraordinary.

kathrynlovespets
12-18-2007, 11:14 PM
i find it interesting that they are all turned away from the viewer