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Corby
12-15-2007, 03:29 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-15-2007/70790_calladone.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: finished Calla
Year Created: 2007
Medium: Oil
Surface: Linen
Dimension: 16X20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
thank you for all your help on this everyone. It still has a couple tangents, but as far as I am conce<br>ed it is finished

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
comments both pro and con are appreciated

micahwg
12-15-2007, 04:55 PM
Very nice work. I really like it. It's soft, yet vibrant, and almost seems to be transluscent.

Ronni
12-15-2007, 06:01 PM
I like it a lot more now. It flows better to me and feels ballansed. The dark sides of table are an interesting riddle to explore and understand, Knowing you are a religious person, you might be content with the clue of an horizental cross in perspective...or may be it is my imagination only:).I find it a tender beautiful still-life, that contains tention and one time original form. Lovely.

Bevahlee
12-15-2007, 06:07 PM
Everything is working beautifully together except for the hard-edge on the left side (black against table). I think the light breaking down into that blackness would help cohese the entirety of the piece. Lovely color

MRSBB
12-15-2007, 07:33 PM
Very nice Corvus, now I am waiting to see that abandoned garden...............Lenore

tony1
12-15-2007, 07:34 PM
Now this is a still life! Great smoke effect. The glass vase is so good. I know nothing about flowers, but these are done so well. Great palette. Another winner.

ejtupi
12-15-2007, 07:41 PM
The depth is very real despite the dreamlike aspects of this painting, Corby. Beautiful work on the vase. The violet colors echo nicely throughout. You're definitely on top of your form!

Dana Design
12-16-2007, 12:07 PM
It's lovely, dreamlike, ethereal and I love it, Corby!

allanom
12-16-2007, 01:34 PM
Very nicely revised. Excellent piece!