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lindash
12-12-2007, 06:06 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-12-2007/115657_Yellow_rose.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Yellow Rose
Year Created: 2007
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 11 x 14
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This was my first painting in a class. The reference is a Artist Referemce book<br><br>Thanks for your comments,<br>Linda

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Since I am a new artist any comment would be apprecialted

Colorix
12-12-2007, 06:12 PM
Hi Linda, welcome to art and to the WC. This is a lovely painting. Only your first? It is fabulous for a first. Fine light, and great variations in the background. I'd love to see it in a photo that is more in focus.

Glad you found art, you obviously have talent!

D.W. Flint
12-12-2007, 08:10 PM
From what I can see it looks like a beautiful painting, but yes, the photo needs to be more of a close up. Great work for one of your firsts...:thumbsup:

Shandiin
12-12-2007, 08:58 PM
I can't really tell for sure if this is a real problem or not because of the quality of the photo, but I think the leaves need more definition. The leaves should also pick up a little more of the colors and tone from the back ground and the blue should extend into more of the background on the left side.