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sunflowers12
12-10-2007, 04:51 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-10-2007/124855_Dear_Diary.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Dear Diary
Year Created: 2007
Medium: Mixed-Media
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 22x28
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Painting about transformation and body image.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
All feedback welcomed.

La_
12-10-2007, 01:03 PM
ooh, i'm liking this very much ... color, comp, hidden discoveries - all good

i would, unless it's totally necessary to you, remove the writing on the book

la

thomas w
12-11-2007, 10:09 AM
Wonderful mix of colors and classisism. There is a great sense of movement throughout this piece. You should continue to make more like this.
Thomas W

sunflowers12
12-11-2007, 12:24 PM
Thank you both for your comments. Most appreciated!! I was thinking the same thing about taking out the "Dear Diary" lettering on the tombstone. Just doesn't fit.
Again thank you very much!
Carolyn