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celestinehart
11-30-2007, 12:11 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/11-29-2007/115989_Picture_or_Video_028.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Date with Daddy
Year Created: 2007
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 11 x 14
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Watercolor

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I like the suject but I had trouble getting realism. Any suggestions?

MRSBB
11-30-2007, 12:34 AM
Hi Celistine and welcome to wet canvas. I really like this one, I see a lot of emotion in the subjects and the meeting. The only thing I see that doesn't sit right with me is it looks like the eyebrow runs across the girls forehead. I would take that out. If it is worry you are trying for, maybe a couple of worry lines higher up on the forehead. I'm no expert, that is just my take on the painting. All said, I really like the mood.......Good job....Lenore

260171
11-30-2007, 03:21 AM
I think realism is not what you should intend here. The work seems to me is more comfortable in its fluid brushwork.
Fine work by me.