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11-28-2007, 04:49 PM
Title: for God sake...
Year Created: 2007
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!
Have never done anything before that wasn't pictorial.
MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Is commposition OK...was going to put text in bottom left, but couldn't make it look right.
11-28-2007, 04:55 PM
Personally I don't think you need the text. The title and work itself speak your point. I think it's well done, I don't agree with the comment, but it's well done. Good title, nice work.
11-28-2007, 05:04 PM
my original title ...why in the name of God...
11-29-2007, 12:43 AM
I don't usual care for "message" art, but this works for me because it seems authentic.
The original title was OK. Why did you change it?
good message ... share it alot - perhaps it will make a few more people think
11-29-2007, 02:34 PM
I like it just the way it is - color, composition, etc. You don't need text.
11-29-2007, 03:47 PM
i feel like it does need something on bottom left....even if it's just very dark green or brown behind the red......so the text idea could be an interesting addition...
I like the curvy lines you used in the blood and in the top symbol
11-29-2007, 08:41 PM
Thank you all for the comments.
Changed the title to fewer words!
I also think lower left is lacking & that is where I would have put in the text (title) had I been capable. My handwriting is quite good, until I put it on canvas!
11-29-2007, 08:44 PM
Didn't mean to omit you in my reply.Thank you!
11-29-2007, 09:24 PM
What a fantastic painting. The colour choice and shading are excellent and the composition gives a great sense of depth. Very well done!!!
11-29-2007, 10:18 PM
Thank you so much! Haven't done much shading in my paintings so thought maybe this pic would be easy practice. Wasn't sure if it worked. Hard for me to spot the obvious errors in my own stuff. So glad you like it.
11-30-2007, 03:38 AM
I was rather taken a back by seeing so many religious symbols. Being from india myself the topmost symbol struck me a bit.
Its a fine representational work very much valid on todays earth where we everyday gets split up around religion.
The work is excellent by me. As La said you should share it more.
11-30-2007, 09:05 AM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful reply. So happy that you found it interesting.
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