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belbibitt
11-26-2007, 11:34 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/11-26-2007/60594_Lack_of_inspiration.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Lack of inspiration
Year Created: 2007
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16 x 20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Didn't have a model ; had perspective problem

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Any comment please

RetrospectiveGlance
11-26-2007, 12:26 PM
Yes the perspective is off a bit. You might want to place the objects closer to one another. With the objects so far apart the objects are scatered and it looks like your painting two pictures in one. With the objects closer together you will gain unity and will also be able to figure out the perspective a bit more to your liking. IT looks as if the paper is placed on a fortyfive degree angle. while the rest of the objects are upright and on a flat surface.

MRSBB
11-26-2007, 05:00 PM
RE: Lack of inspiration..........I think there is just too much going on in this picture, I like the sheet music and wine. Think that would make a nice composition. Keep having fun..........Lenore