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Busik12
10-21-2007, 11:22 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/10-21-2007/99375_2.jpg



GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Self-Portrait
Year Created: 2007
Medium: Other
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 19" x 25"
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Self-portrait in drawing crayons and crayon pencil on paper.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Please provide any crits that you see fit!

Busik12
10-22-2007, 09:23 AM
I don't know why my images never upload...

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c42/Sundu/Other%20Artwork/001.jpg

La_
10-22-2007, 01:40 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/22-Oct-2007/84648-001.jpg

La_
10-22-2007, 01:41 PM
very nicely done sundu, love the color choice

la

Corby
10-22-2007, 03:25 PM
A handsome portrait, nicely realized! I have a reservation about the light. It is beautifully indicated, however the highlight along the nose on the right side gives me to think the light source must be from the right. That seems to be the brightest highlight and the light shines across and hits the wall on the left making another bright spot as it should. In keeping with that the reflected light on the left cheek and the chest work nicely. My question is that it would seem the ear for example on the faces right side would share the same degree of highlight as the nose? The right side of the neck? And the temple? The lips are soft6 and the highlight there seems fine.