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yet another rework
MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
medium crop detail
10-19-2007, 07:32 PM
I will be honest. I couldnt believe that this is your work La. Its too bad to be yours. The face is distorted and whats that blue region next to her?
I am used to your excellent paintings and this is not one of them.
10-19-2007, 10:15 PM
I do find the overall composition very good, with it,s many details of walls/interiors (?) and reminds me of those early Bathus painting.
The "blue region" is awkward though.
I think you might be "affraid" to work with strong contrasts that would bring your work somewhere else.
10-19-2007, 10:25 PM
The green object really jars against the composition. As does the left hand.
yeah yea, back to the drawing board with it, thanks much for your honesty! this one pretty much sucks
much as there's freedom in re-working old pieces, sometimes .. well, ya just get deeper into crap.
okay, so, last gasp at this one ... i totally agree that the previous 'she' sucked big time, but i did like parts of the background and figured it worth working some more.
halloween is getting close, creep mode snuck in for this rework ... hands are Huge, i know, proportions are wonky, but I think it's better work, if not better for saleable.
New title is "What's your Poison"
and a detail ...
10-21-2007, 06:33 PM
Significantly better :) I dont want to drink what ever is in that bottle, for sure.
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