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artinthebush
10-12-2007, 07:23 AM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/12-Oct-2007/109390-Photbucket_h2.jpg
150 x 200mm
Oil on Board
"Hibiscus 2"
Hopefully a bit of an improvement - but we'll never know, will we?

Andi Rebirth
10-12-2007, 07:50 AM
artinthebrush, I see a maked improvement here, White is very hard to do put on canvas or paper and you have done a good job..Your leaves are also very well executed. Good job!:thumbsup:

ranunkel
10-12-2007, 10:55 AM
You did a good job on this white flower.

artinthebush
10-12-2007, 11:34 AM
Thanks for your comments. They mean alot to me as every criticism means that I will eventually one day become a better artist.
Bob

Lady Carol
10-12-2007, 02:20 PM
This is very nice. Well done.

loralee55
10-17-2007, 12:37 PM
Very nice. I had many of colored plants outside my home in Hawaii and I sure miss them. Lots of color and contrast in your pic like it a lot
loralee

Ceci
10-17-2007, 01:12 PM
Hi Bob, real nice, love your white.
Just happened to be lurcking here thinking of doing some flowers, but see that you are like God, everywhere !!
ceci

debsn2paintn
10-18-2007, 11:58 AM
Very pretty.

Charlie's Mum
10-18-2007, 03:19 PM
I like the fairly loose approach to the leaves and the crisp whiteness of the flower.
It nestles beautifully into the leaves too. It's another lovely painting.

You could, perhaps, try introducing the vaguest glaze of surrounding colour into the white in places - the flower would reflect the surrounding greens and the red of the stamen ... but very subtley.

marionh
10-18-2007, 03:21 PM
I like your hibiscus very much. :clap:
I do feel though, that the pale green background detracts from it a little. My initial reaction was that a darker background would enhance an already nice painting. I took the liberty of changing the background in photoshop (I hope you don't mind) just to get an idea of what it would look like. I'm not an expert in PS so please take this as a representation. In the second one I also added some more shadow on the bottom rh leave.
Dark green background:
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/18-Oct-2007/42113-109390-Photbucket_h21_Small.JPG
Reddish background:
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/18-Oct-2007/42113-109390-Photbucket_h24_Small.jpg

valchina612
10-25-2007, 04:43 AM
This is a lovely painting. I very much like the shape and the folds in the White Hibiscus. :clap: :thumbsup:

Val. :wave: