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noneuclidean
09-30-2007, 05:24 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-30-2007/106228_dawnchurch.JPG



GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: New Dawn on a Dead Church
Year Created: 2007
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 11" x 14"
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
It is supposed to be a sunrise and the silhouette of the remains of an abandoned church.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Anything and everything will be appreciated.

Corby
09-30-2007, 08:16 PM
Perhaps I am stating the obvious but...works of this nature must be done with an eye to framing...otherwise your frame may cover up your image.

Lily_Katz
09-30-2007, 09:04 PM
I tend to agree with Corvus. The composition would be better if the church was made more important. Here's a quick crop of what I mean:


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/30-Sep-2007/102931-Untitled.jpg

noneuclidean
10-01-2007, 04:57 PM
Thanks so much. It makes a lot more sense that way. I should really start put more planning into my work.

La_
10-02-2007, 12:07 PM
There's alot of room on that canvas, and alot of pink! perhaps you could just make the church bigger, let it grow into some of that space and become a more obvious focal point.
Love the title!

La