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jan409
09-20-2007, 01:20 PM
I have been working on this THING for a week. I have gotten a few more gray hairs from it. I decided it would not break me. I would finish it. I did. I don't like it but I did finish it. I even discovered I had dreams about it. I will probably gesso over it. I am not sure about that, but I wanted to post it and let you all know it drove me nuts. But I did enjoy it. I know that sounds funny. I sat the still life up on a dresser with a piece of cloth. It is two bottles of vinigar, one with herbs and the other with peppers. C&C please. Janhttp://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/20-Sep-2007/63545-100_0389.JPG

gaykir
09-20-2007, 02:11 PM
Jan - Don't you hate those times when you just can't seem to get past whatever is making you nuts! The only problem I see is that the spacing between 3 points. That being the two bottles and the bowl. They are too evenly spaced. The other tiny crit is all the folds are pointing to the center. I guess what it comes down to is the composition doesn't work well though you've done a good job painting . I love the vinegar with the dill or whatever in it!

jan409
09-20-2007, 02:26 PM
Gayle; Thank you for looking. And for your kind words of encouragement. Jan

Jeff Rage
09-20-2007, 02:46 PM
Bottles, Bowl, And Some Acid - I thought you were describing some new painting technique! :D


Nice work!

jan409
09-20-2007, 02:55 PM
Thanks Jeff, I have trouble thinking of titles. Jan

Linee
09-20-2007, 03:14 PM
Besides the largest bottle being too centralized, imo, I think it's a winner. Nice color. I wouldn't gesso over it. You picked the perfect frame for it.

jan409
09-20-2007, 04:13 PM
Thank you Linda, I think I will keep it. Jan

LavenderFrost
09-21-2007, 12:56 PM
It would be a shame to gesso over all that work. I like it.

jan409
09-21-2007, 03:19 PM
I have it varnished and in a frame. I am going to hang it in the spare bedroom. The bed cover is a tan and moss green and it seems to match the painting. Thank you all for your comments. Jan

Bill_E
09-21-2007, 03:48 PM
Jan, it reminds me of an old photo portrait. I think the very things compositionally that made it less than what you had hoped are actually the things that give it a unique and charming character. I like it :)

jan409
09-21-2007, 04:39 PM
Thank you Bill. Jan