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RACHEL52
09-09-2007, 03:18 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/09-Sep-2007/35984-SEA_P2.jpg http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/09-Sep-2007/35984-SEA_P.jpg http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/09-Sep-2007/35984-SEA3.jpg [IMG]http:// hi this the second try .the firt was terrible so i painted over it ,what do you think ? please c/c good or bad i can take it. also what is the best way to paint sun reflections and an easy way to learn to paint clouds this attemt took me ages.:wave: thank you rachel

LavenderFrost
09-09-2007, 03:27 PM
Your images are much too tiny to really see. You can size them up to 500 pixels wide.

idcrisis55
09-09-2007, 03:48 PM
Hi Rachel, you might resize your images to 500 pixels wide so it is easier for us to view. Looks like you have a good start though on your painting from what I can see. :)

RACHEL52
09-09-2007, 04:08 PM
hi thanks for the help i hope you can all see thyem now thank you rachel::wave:

idcrisis55
09-09-2007, 04:12 PM
Much better. :) Thank you for resizing. If you are painting the yellow into blue you could try painting yellow, then add a little pink or red then blue. It keeps the blue from turning green. You could practice it on scrap paper or canvas until you see something you like. :) One suggestion I have is paint a hint of the sunset color just above the lower clouds. That carries the feeling of the sunset blending then into the bluer sky. :)

dreamz
09-09-2007, 04:46 PM
I like the scene you've created and I like the clouds you did although the white may be to bright for the building storm in the distance, I really like the turbulent blue sky!
If you dont want to add red or violet to your sunsets you can underpaint the area with white to prevent the green and make teh yellow really pop.
There are as many ways to paint clouds as there are clouds.
One way is to loosely swirl the brush across the area, adding slightly different colors to build layers.
A large brushed dipped in paint then tapped off so its almost dry and stippled onto the surface, can also be combined with the previous method.
A natural sponge tapped on the surface gives another effect, lightly swirling with a dry brush softens the look, repeat with slightly different colors to add depth.
I like working wet on wet when "building" a sky because the paint creates its own streaky clouds

jan409
09-09-2007, 06:46 PM
Great clouds, I like the color. Jan

RACHEL52
09-09-2007, 08:30 PM
hi laveder frost, thank you for your help managed to resize after your info thank you so much rachel
jan thank you for your c/c
idcrisis55 thank you so much for your c/c will try your idea thanks for yourc/c .dreamz thank you for your c/c and you know what i was trying to find a way to help the sun to pop and i will try your idea thank you rachel

LavenderFrost
09-10-2007, 02:27 PM
You've gotten some good advice already. I like the fluffiness of your clouds.

RACHEL52
09-11-2007, 06:06 PM
hi thanks to all . ihave taken all c/c on board and some other changes and reworked this apinting and i feel much better about it .so what do you think of changes thanks once again rachel

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