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07-12-2007, 06:26 PM
Here is another flowers and fruit I did today. It's 8" x 10" on illustration board.
Any comments and critiques are appreciated.
07-12-2007, 07:19 PM
I like the colors, yellow and purple, red and green. Very good. Jan
07-12-2007, 07:24 PM
07-12-2007, 08:09 PM
Bright and cheerful and pretty. What's not to like. I'd prefer a little darker shadow at least immediately under the vases and fruit. If not the entire shadow, just a line and a bit fading out to the end of the shadow.
07-12-2007, 08:18 PM
Thanks Paula! Good point - I will do that.
07-12-2007, 09:34 PM
Very nice Tracey...this series must look lovely together!
07-12-2007, 10:08 PM
07-12-2007, 10:27 PM
I love the color combo in this. Beautiful.
07-12-2007, 10:39 PM
Thanks so much Celeste, Margaret, and Linda! I have lots of fun painting these little ones. I feel like I can experiment more.
07-12-2007, 10:39 PM
Tracey this is gorgeous. I love the colors.
07-12-2007, 10:43 PM
Thank you Sue!
07-12-2007, 10:50 PM
Nice job. Perhaps I would strengthen the body shadow a little on the yellow vase.
07-13-2007, 03:38 AM
i love your style !! ... loose, playful, cheery, and colourful !! .. if you're going to fiddle with it though, the red vase' shadow could be brought to the left a bit ...
07-13-2007, 04:47 AM
Tracey. A charming light hearted and 'full of the joys of summer' painting.
The colours are really good. Good advice from Paula.
07-13-2007, 08:39 AM
Thank you so much Bob, Violet, and Chammi!! Great suggestions - very helpful!!! I will make those changes today.
07-13-2007, 08:52 AM
Nice colors and a bold confident sense in the brush strokes. It feels sunny and bright to me.
07-13-2007, 09:21 AM
Thank you Howard!!
07-13-2007, 08:45 PM
Tracey, this is lovely - a nice cheerful painting :clap: I would suggest having a couple of the apples overlap each other to lessen the space between them.
07-13-2007, 10:37 PM
Thank you Briege! I will keep that in mind for the next one.
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