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04-16-2007, 11:27 PM
This is one of my first attempts at a painting in acrylics. I would appreciate any constructive criticism.
04-17-2007, 01:19 AM
This is my favorite bird, I plan on painting one someday. I am so new at painting I can only offer my opinion so take it with a grain of salt cause I may not know of what I speak :) but I think a few highlights in the body of the bird would be nice.
04-17-2007, 01:38 AM
I think you have got that fine looking bird just right.Nice work.
04-17-2007, 04:11 AM
Rob this is very good for early attempts at acrylic. Your background trees are delightful. A few little highlights and darks for the wing feathers would make this even better. Well done.
04-17-2007, 08:16 AM
I agree with all the above, its a great piece for a beginning. The background seems a bit empty, something like a lake and distant shoreline would give more depth as would some more variation in the tree colors. The figure itself is a great base, with some details and shading/highlights it would be quite stunning.. perhaps browsing through the animal and wildlife section would give you some tips
04-17-2007, 11:34 AM
Wonderful beginning and you have some great advice. Think about adding a highlight to the bird's eye, this will help to bring it alive.
Welcome to the forum.
04-17-2007, 01:20 PM
MY favorite bird, too. They are just beautiful. I think everyone is giving you some great advice...You need more darks and lights and it will pop.
04-17-2007, 06:04 PM
Hi and adding my welcome. You did great for your first attempt with acrylics. You have received some good suggestions and hope you will share more of your work with us.
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