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Andun
04-08-2007, 04:15 AM
:wave: I just can't seem to stop painting!:lol: I better slow down or there will be no room in here for me to move!
Here is my latest.A bunch of friends on an icy pond.Shoes make good goal posts.:thumbsup:
Whaddya think?
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/08-Apr-2007/84252-VFSH0380.JPG

dreamz
04-08-2007, 04:27 AM
Your really blasting them out! This one really turned out great... time to start posting on ebay and get ya some room back:lol:

Andun
04-08-2007, 04:42 AM
:wave: Hi Doc!
Thanks mightily sire!:D I had a good time doing this one.I sure miss playing on ponds with my buddies.Ya figure somone would buy this???

Lulu
04-08-2007, 05:25 AM
That's really cool Tony! You have captured the day and temperature well, I can almost see their icy breath!

Jackie339
04-08-2007, 07:49 AM
Cool Anthony, I like the movement that you've captured!

Linee
04-08-2007, 08:18 AM
I really like it Anthony! Like the bright colors and action. :)

With my first glance it looks, to me, like they are on a ledge. I would try to soften the edge between the light and dark area of the ice. Just an observation.

Charlie's Mum
04-08-2007, 08:44 AM
Like the viewpoint :D
Like the interaction of the figures - :thumbsup:
Like the colours - except for the ?hills? - think perhaps the green is a little too strong and the 'join' of land and ice neds some thought :D

Also, the darker blue stretching across in aband gives me the impression of a vertical plane rather than the horizontal one of the lighter surface ... just needs breaking up a little with the lighter blue :D

Lady Carol
04-08-2007, 10:02 AM
Excellent action caught on canvas.

I have to agree with Maureen about the hills and the band of ice. The seem too dominant and take away from the figures too much. But well done in capturing a moment in time.

swampborn
04-08-2007, 11:08 AM
Keep them coming. You paint such a variety of subjects and do well with all. I can't wait to see the next one!
Gail

eyepaint
04-08-2007, 12:20 PM
Oooh this is a great "camera angle". Did you spend any time growing up in Canada playing hockey outdoors on frozen ponds?

chammi kaiser
04-08-2007, 12:58 PM
Agree about the hills being too dominant but simply love the movement and energy in the figures. Great stuff.

mprince
04-08-2007, 02:16 PM
Great composition :thumbsup: Also like the skate marks in the ice.

dreamz
04-08-2007, 03:23 PM
No guarantee Tony but I believe your work would sell and posting on ebay is cheap. Ive only had limited results but others sell everything they post

Andun
04-08-2007, 11:25 PM
Hi Lulu:) They seem to be having fun,huh!

Andun
04-08-2007, 11:26 PM
Thank you Jackie:)

Andun
04-08-2007, 11:27 PM
Good morning Linda:) I see what you mean about the "ledge" effect.I'll try to smooth that out .Thanks

Andun
04-08-2007, 11:29 PM
Gotcha Maureen:) Hills,ice and joining portion.Will do!Thank you for the great ideas.It's so nice to have extra eyes.

Andun
04-08-2007, 11:30 PM
Thank you Carol:) You're sweet to say so.

Andun
04-08-2007, 11:31 PM
I guess I just haven't found my special subject yet Gail:) I'll just keep trying new stuff til I do!

Andun
04-08-2007, 11:32 PM
Hi EP:) I sure did! I am a Canadian boy.Dang near died playing pond hockey with my brother when I was 10.The ice broke and in we went.Had to walk home with frozen pants.

Andun
04-08-2007, 11:33 PM
I'll be working on those hills today Chamni:) Thanks for keeping an eye on me.

Andun
04-08-2007, 11:34 PM
So glad you noticed the skate marks mprince:) They made it more realistic for me!!

Andun
04-08-2007, 11:35 PM
Hey Doc:) I should try there huh! Nothing ventured...

Andun
04-08-2007, 11:50 PM
:wave: Thanks to your wonderful advice my in house critic(the missus)likes the painting now:lol: Thank you.:heart:
Here is the updated version.Is it ok now?
Tony
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/08-Apr-2007/84252-VFSH0382.JPG

Lady Carol
04-08-2007, 11:54 PM
That works for me. It is so much better. It makes more sense now without the green.

Andun
04-09-2007, 12:05 AM
Couldn't have done it without you Carol:) Thank you!!!