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Vasilis
04-07-2007, 04:18 AM
This is my new work i named it sanctuary.
To say the truth I'm not satisfied with the shadows on snow!!! Perhaps there are many other mistakes I cannot see them yet.
Your critique will be very helpfull for me to improve this work.
I use photoshop, artrage and corel painter X.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/07-Apr-2007/104325-06.jpg

barryt
04-07-2007, 05:52 AM
A nice pic, but if the sun is out on snow, then the shadow will be blue from the ambient light from the blue sky and not too dark.

LadyAlba
04-08-2007, 01:17 AM
Nice one and yes to the blue snow. :wave:

Annie*M
04-08-2007, 04:21 PM
Very nice work Vasilis. Perhaps the pitch of the roof could be lowered a little at the rear.:)

justjean
04-09-2007, 12:00 AM
Very nice and I agree with Annie :)

Yako
04-09-2007, 10:32 AM
Vasilis, it's a beautiful and peaceful scene!:) :thumbsup:
Perhaps because i'll say something a bit silly since i'm not an artist, but there is a little problem of composition. Perhaps you could move the lodge a bit to the left. I've read that one should avoid subjects that touch the borders of the frame.

Vasilis
04-11-2007, 05:45 AM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/11-Apr-2007/104325-06.jpg
Well I made some corrections following your advises and thank you all :thumbsup: :wink2:
Yako you are absolutelly right on this matter with the subjects and the borders. I made one of the basic mistakes!!!!!!! :clap: :clap: :clap:
Maybe because when I draw i think that it's photography and it will be more realistic if i focus on the mountains and show this way the environment where the subject is !!!!! Well I'm more comfused now !!!!:eek: just jokin :)