Rabbit

[Vasilena]

MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-20-2002/6728_Rabbit.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Rabbit
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Paper
Dimension: NA
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
None

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I lightened the vegetables in the rabbits vagon, as Henrik suggested.Is it better?How is the composition?

[henrik]

That is better, but I still think there is a small problem with the frui ligning up with the rocks. Attached is an illustration where they don't. Notice that I also softened the rocks to push them more into the background. I also softened some of the leaves to push them far back - this to add some depth. I added a hint of more fruit in the basket and increased the highlights, and added some shadow.
The rocks are floating since there are no shadows on the ground - I added some. I made the shadows a tad bluer also.

[Vasilena]

:rolleyes:
I guess I will have to do the whole thing again...because you are so right about the fruits and the shadows!
Thanks!
You are incredibly helpful!:D

[henrik]

It is only a minor thing - it is lovely as it is - you don't have to redo it.

[Vasilena]

Thanks!:)