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Nichoolaas
12-11-2006, 02:06 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-11-2006/82958_IMG_0001sm.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-11-2006/82958_IMG_0001asm.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Woman and Her Table/ Black Fingernailed
Year Created: 2006
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 8x12ish
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
these sit together on the wall so though to post em together.
acrylics on watercolor.
small and very simplistic but have a charm and an effect.
i like them. look good on the wall too

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
whats your vibe. all feedback/ critique is appreciated

bpc
12-11-2006, 02:35 PM
Kinda reminds me of the sketches in the old Sears cataloque..anyway..the upper figure I like..but I find the lower pretty grotesque.

RobertGarland
12-11-2006, 03:24 PM
I agree. Definitely a little disturbing. Not that there's anything wrong with that. hahaha

Nichoolaas
12-11-2006, 08:33 PM
yeah grotesque is prolly right. i even had to tone it down in the painted version.
cheers for looking

Nichoolaas
12-12-2006, 07:06 PM
yeah i kindof want a litttle more commenting.
sorry

paulavanzanten
12-12-2006, 09:04 PM
I like the simplicity and shape of the top one though I am not quite sure what this thing is she is holding above her head and if you really need it there. The bottom one looks like a guy with sockings. The stockings are more of an eye catcher than the black fingernails.........

La_
12-13-2006, 12:00 AM
Okay, ... this is very good practice ... composition wise they're very good, especially the first one and even the second.

When one can draw Really well, and has proven that in a history of works, then one can simple line draw like this and get away with it because even in the simplest line, there is form ... and it works.

Practice will get you there.

La

Nichoolaas
12-16-2006, 01:25 AM
thanks for your thoughts.
the black fingernail were never really the focus... just a name and the pants tend to draw the eyea bit much.
Im gllad i got away with it la. :)