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lst
12-07-2006, 01:58 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-07-2006/81081_zsunlit_trail.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Sunlit Trail
Year Created: 2006
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 18x24
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This is a painting of a picture I took while on a trial ride. I was struck by the dappled sunlight coming through the trees.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
This is a relatively new style for me. Any crits are welcome.

Celticelf
12-07-2006, 04:19 PM
You caught that light, too. My eyes keep coming back to it and sinking in the greens. Great.

csa-studio
12-07-2006, 08:59 PM
I like the feeling of light in this !! good job

Eduardo Flores
12-08-2006, 07:31 AM
Very very good: highly harmonious and poetic.

Eduardo

SusanEleven
12-08-2006, 11:15 PM
Very nice painting with a lovely, dreamlike quality.

Nayana
12-08-2006, 11:46 PM
very airy and appealing painting.

dsimons
12-09-2006, 12:33 AM
I agree with all of the above.

bpc
12-09-2006, 01:14 PM
I like your painting..very warm and inviting..soft and friendly..the gait of the horses comes through..I think they are also enjoying the ride.

lst
12-10-2006, 09:17 AM
I appreciate all your comments, and yet I'm still not happy with it. I've made a few changes (a result of a friends critique) which I'll post soon. Hopefully for the better. I could really use some harsh crits so I can understand my mistakes. Dont get me wrong, the nice comments are welcome too. The picture here is a little fuzzy.

Constellation
12-10-2006, 10:13 AM
1st.... I think it's a delightful happy painting and the dappled sun is so warm and cuddly..... my only crit. would be the left leg of the rear horse.... it looks much too frail.... good job on everything else! Donna