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gaensanger
12-02-2006, 04:42 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-02-2006/94183_Bild_05_klein.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: werewolf
Year Created: 2006
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 40 x 50 cm
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This style my master showed to me and I did some paintings in this monochrome way. The look of the woman gave her the name "werewolf".

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
What do you say about monochrome work?

SherylG
12-02-2006, 04:20 PM
I like monochromatic work. This is distinctive and intense!

Just a few small things to look at:
The brightness of the clouds is distracting and takes the attention away from the woman. I would continue the sky mist all the way down, as well, not to cut the painting in half.
Are those her two legs below the blouse? The dark space should be smaller, I think - the legs closer together and wider.
Bare shoulder is a bit too bony. Could be rounded out more with a bit more muscle.
Pupil in left eye is bigger than right and mouth is too small.