View Full Version : new at painting, 1st work

10-16-2006, 05:40 PM
this is my first work ever, can you give me a critic (sorry for the bad quality of the photo it was taken in my mobile phone...http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/16-Oct-2006/92822-IMAGE_00007.jpg

chammi kaiser
10-16-2006, 05:45 PM
Very good graphics there with the cards. If you could give me some idea of the title , I would be able to give you a more informative critique. Chammi

10-16-2006, 06:01 PM
the title is "Love cards" thx

Charlie's Mum
10-16-2006, 06:38 PM
For a first - good!
Lots of contrast and feeling.
Welcome to the forum - and as you're new, do look at the info and knowledge in the Information Kiosk - a sub forum here ......... plenty there to help you :D

When posting a work, it usually helps to give the title, size and surface (canvas, paper etc) and any of your thoughts about the work which help place it in context for the rest of us :D

10-16-2006, 06:55 PM
I can only imagine the actual colors but I really like the compostion

10-16-2006, 07:24 PM
it was on a 50x70 canvas....and it was made on a cotton canvas...the paint its more shiny than the photo acttualy

10-16-2006, 07:32 PM
having a lot of fun...mate. thx

10-16-2006, 08:21 PM
and here its my second and last work it was also made in a 50x70 canvas the inspiration was similar because they are side 2 side in a wall of my house...http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/16-Oct-2006/92822-IMAGE_00003.jpg, also a mobile pic...no digital....title its...heaven's game...or not?

10-16-2006, 08:50 PM
a very cool series you have started, I can see why your having fun

10-16-2006, 09:36 PM
yes but the serie is over, i would like 2 do a paint with blended colors but i think its 2 dificult and dont know how, i have read some posts but still not sure how...don't if i use a medium and what medium, or if i just use water to do it...and dont know what 2 paint first the dark or the softer colors first...can anyone help me???

10-18-2006, 12:51 AM
or would a airbrush do the trick easier?