design for room with bed

[bluemagoo]

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/14-Jul-2006/16354-IMG_0206.JPG
this is a working underpainting to figure out an unmade bed with a window and chest [will skinny up left side more]. actually it's mimicking the
window shape plus it will hold a vase with yellow flower]
would it look better if it were more a chest shape than lingerie.?
some sort of curtains by window and picture in right top corner.
well iwish i could organize and clean my real bedroom like this;)
c&c welcomed

[bruin70]

you're trying to sort things out as you work, and asking questions about things no one else sees but you.

can you post a quick drawing(preferably a value sketch either painted or with markers. pencil value sketches are hopeless), so that we can understand where you're going. it will help you in the long run and clarify things.