jonathan...(redone)

[jioRji]

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Well I took someone's advice and I redrew this sketch, and originally the point of the second sketch was to fix the problems I made before with the hands and also fix the other problems...BUT apparently, along the way, I decided to focus on the eyes mainly.
And I think this looks so much accurate compared to the other sketch..it looks more like him..therefore the second study of Jonathan wasn't a failure...not at all!!! http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/smile.gif

~jioRji~

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[MichaelRH]

jioRji -

Beautiful drawing! Jonathan has a wonderful face, and as I'm sure you would agree...his eyes..they do cause one to look again. I like how you've varied your line, and combined line with softer areas. Very effective.
Thank you jioRji for posting this drawing.
--Michael

[nancymae]

Very nice drawing!!! I would not call this a sketch!!! I like that you left the details off the hair and the hands to concentrate on the eyes and face. Wonderful!!!

Nancy

[jioRji]

Thanx to both....I guess my goal has been accomplished...I've managed to get what i wanted from this drawing....and the critics have noticed what they should've been..and the eyes....yes the eyes are very special..

~jioRji~

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