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Anonymous
02-07-2006, 12:54 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/02-07-2006/15081_critical.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: "... critical"
Year Created: 2006
Medium: Pencil
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 11x14
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I see the neck tendon. I left it because it was INTENSE...

Pencil: Derwent HB Sketching

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I got used to her the more I looked... how about you? Does it push the limit of surreal somehow?

pampe
02-07-2006, 05:36 PM
appealing drawing

no limit pushing for me

Constellation
02-07-2006, 08:15 PM
Hi anonymous..... I get the feeling that she is furious about something... were you trying for surreal? Donna

Dana Design
02-08-2006, 12:36 PM
Yes, the neck tendon is very tight in this but there should be a counterpoint to the opposite tendon, IMO. Also, the shoulder on the viewer's left side seems too high.

I do think that with such a lovely rendering of her face, the neck steals that attention. Why put the focus on that?

Great work on that very delicate face! Did I say that?

Dhuot
02-08-2006, 10:53 PM
Oh, I think it is treffic.
Her eyes are amazing.
Some of the "physionomy" features are a bit "off" and makes it work so much.
Charm :)