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StreetTrash
02-06-2006, 07:42 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/02-06-2006/76139_chick_dospreview.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Band Aid.
Year Created: 2005
Medium: Charcoal
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 9
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I saw this picture in Rolling Stone, and I thought it looked cool.
I threw the Bob Dylan shirt on her, though.


MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Any feedback on improvements, i know it could use many!!

Constellation
02-06-2006, 08:48 PM
Hi... You are right, it is cool! I think it's terrific... your proportions seem very accurate... she's attractive and very believable.... good job! The only thing I see that bothers me is that her hands seem to be a little crude... but as small as this drawing is they would be difficult to do... I still think it's great! Donna

Rasta_PopSiCLeS
02-06-2006, 10:57 PM
This drawing is neat, however there is much detail on the face, and it seems that the artist became lazy and didnt put as much detail on the rest of the drawing.

pampe
02-07-2006, 05:34 PM
well done...hope it is not a copyright issue from the magazine????