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Anonymous
02-04-2006, 10:28 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/02-04-2006/2383_pink-cloud.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/02-04-2006/2383_pink-cloud-gallery2.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/02-04-2006/2383_pink-cloud-outside.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Pink Cloud
Year Created: 2006
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 40in by 45in
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
A large abstract landscape...with copper paint accent.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Any comment welcomed.

Dana Design
02-04-2006, 11:27 AM
Love, love, love the colors! What a presence this must make.

Diffusing the pinks into the blues would have been my choice but this works anyway as it is.

Constellation
02-04-2006, 11:44 AM
WOW Very exciting and attention getting! I love it! Donna

gigih
02-04-2006, 12:22 PM
I too love the colors, but I think I would have done more with the cloud. If its your focal point, it looks flat. I would have added some more colors to give it more character and a bit of 3 dimensional look to it.

Zap
02-04-2006, 01:44 PM
I really like the overall concept of the work. I do have to say that the cloud is bothersome for me too. It draws my attention immediately and I cant seem to get my eye to move beyond it. I like Dana's solution.

Nayana
02-04-2006, 02:04 PM
very interesting and unusual concept. I like the ground and the color combinations quite a bit but the negative space in the cloud is really dystracting, not sure what to think of that space, almost forbodeing.

Fagan
02-04-2006, 04:31 PM
thank you for the feedback! I made some changes on the cloud. I faded it out more on the top edges...added some deeper color on the base of the cloud. what do you think?

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/04-Feb-2006/2383-pink-cloud.jpg

Aludien
02-04-2006, 04:34 PM
much better :)

Fagan
02-04-2006, 08:44 PM
Thanks Nathalie:D

bocote
02-05-2006, 12:23 AM
nice changes and I think you can go more. Experiment with lights over darks while leaving some paint under it for the effect I think you are trying to get.

have fun,

Corby
02-05-2006, 01:16 AM
Hi Fagan! Your reworking of the cloud is a great improvement, seems we can actually walk under it now!

kathrynlovespets
02-05-2006, 10:34 AM
i love the cloud now that you've revamped it....