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tbezesky
02-03-2006, 04:02 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/02-03-2006/11381_parade4b.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Marching in the Parade 2
Year Created: 2006
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 18x14
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I did this for a benefit auction for the University depicted in this painting.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
This is a redo from a smaller version I just did. Is it better? I still find it to be a tough subject.

Spyderbabe
02-03-2006, 04:58 PM
Yes, it seems cleaner and fresher. The background buildings still demand a lot of our attention.

Lobster Alla Prima
02-03-2006, 08:12 PM
I remember the last version and it definitely is brighter now.

You had said in the past the building was part of the university having the auction, so mentally I think that's why it ended up drawing attention.

pampe
02-03-2006, 08:48 PM
I didn't see the other one but this is charming...the sky is wonderful....I love the linear layout and repetiveness of the band

nice

tbezesky
02-04-2006, 02:28 PM
Thanks for commenting Spyderbabe, Pampe, and L. Alla Prima.
Yes I think I will try to subdue the buildings a bit. I made them too saturated the first time too.

tbezesky
02-04-2006, 05:18 PM
I made the building lighter by wiping of the colors and letting the yellow ground come through.