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S.McPherson
02-03-2006, 10:53 AM
Continuing my food alphabet...Frankfurter on a Bun. Oil, 8x10 on Marc's panel. will also post my http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/03-Feb-2006/65215-100_0222.jpg http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/03-Feb-2006/65215-100_0227.jpg set up. All comments and suggestions welcome. Thanks for looking.:) Sandy

ColorMyWorld
02-03-2006, 01:08 PM
Sandy, this bun really came out nice.
My only suggestion would be to make the mustard more a haphard pattern rather than a zig-zag. The geometric pattern in an otherwise curvy, organic composition seems a bit at odds with the rest of the lovely painting.
I'm headed for lunch now. I'm suddenly hungry!

JamieWG
02-03-2006, 04:02 PM
Hiya, Sandy! Glad to see you continuing with the alphabet series. I think the frank and bun are very well done. If the mustard lines were just very slightly curved, they would add that third dimension by showing that they go around the frank.

Very good color and value on this one.

Jamie

Wayne Gaudon
02-03-2006, 04:38 PM
nice .. just a little more variance in the mustard color and some under shadow for dept.

Wyn Easton
02-03-2006, 05:27 PM
Nice buns (heh heh). This looks like it was a lot of fun to do.
Good job.

Marc Hanson
02-04-2006, 12:28 AM
'Frankly' my dear...everyone has hit the mark with their comments. It's the mustard's line, contour, that needs some adjustment. "Follow the form" of the dog and this will be a good painting. The bun is done exceptionally well.

How's the barn/garden...version 1 or 2? :D Look how well you do from life! Our class project involves so much more invention...that's hard compared to this isn't it?