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tremblad
01-15-2006, 09:57 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/01-15-2006/45252_MWSnap_2006-01-15,_20_51_19.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Untitled
Year Created: 2006
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Board
Dimension: 12x16
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Still learning ...

Based on a zoom (zero-in?) made in a photo taking in a small street of Lisboa, Portugal.

I feel that the linear perspective is somewhat a little bit wrong but I don't really care for now.

We almost see a figure in the shadow at the left. It is an accident, it was not intentional. But I like to see this figure there!

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Anything that could help me for my future attempts ...

dornberg
01-16-2006, 01:07 AM
i like the color treatment

donn_granros
01-16-2006, 01:16 AM
It appears that the perspective might be off a bit on the top line vs the bottom.
(shown). Personally I like the picture and composition so absolute perspective is moot.

Constellation
01-16-2006, 08:37 AM
So sunny and pleasant.... I'd like to investigate that street! I like the painting, too! Donna