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justjean
01-12-2006, 10:09 PM
her shape is weird and the upper leg area is to big but I'll get better with practice .... I hope... and as you couldn't see her face I decided to hang the hair over it :) I did use a grid but at 72 dpi and sized at 100 x 100 it's not tedious at all :)
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/12-Jan-2006/36920-Image1.jpg

barryt
01-13-2006, 05:52 AM
Great going Jean! Not sure the upper leg is too big, not from tha pose amd perspective. The hand on the shoulder might be? Like the color, are you taking it further

jhercilia
01-13-2006, 09:48 AM
yeah, the hand looks kind of big. Are you planning on developing it further?

justjean
01-17-2006, 06:37 PM
LOL, well I resized the hand now maybe it's to small? :) her angle is off from the reference so I didn't put her right thigh showing
and I covered her face with hair LOL,
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/17-Jan-2006/36920-Image1.jpg

jhercilia
01-17-2006, 08:28 PM
The hand look fine to me.

waheednasir
01-18-2006, 01:51 PM
hi jean, this is going on just fine, nice update...:). hope its ok with u if i suggest a couple of points: there are some anatomical issues, which are effecting the whole thing. for eg (mojor ones are), her left hand is a bit too small, compare it with her right arm (forearm), breast looks odd and i dont see her right hip, from this angle, it has to be visible thru the small opening of her lower legs.
it would be good to have a definate light source...:). i dont see any shadow as hard as the one, at the back of the knee (left leg). if its right, then her left arm would throw a shadow on her body (breast), as well.
if u agree, u can do the changes to see if all this works...:).

all the best, with your future updates...:wave:.

justjean
01-18-2006, 09:50 PM
thanks Janet and Waheed :)

I see what you mean Waheed thank you , maybe one day I will get the hilights and shadows right if you don't get fed up with me first :D

LadyAlba
01-19-2006, 02:19 AM
My gosh Jean I didn't even see this one! You are getting there in leaps and bounds! ;o)

barryt
01-19-2006, 04:12 AM
It's going great Jean, I would keep working at it, the picture is worth it