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jay walker
01-07-2006, 06:12 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/01-07-2006/73065_clocks_013.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: 50% witch
Year Created: 2006
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Wood
Dimension: 2 x 4 by 5 inches
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
all comments greatly recieved

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
comment on anything

Grunge
01-07-2006, 11:55 AM
HI! That's an interesting piece you've got there. You can tell, of course, that it is a witch. the absence of the other two panels allows the viewer to fill in the blanks. but to me it needs something more to make it more interesting. maybe some colour. maybe more realism in the eye.

you have nice tones working through out the flesh to create volume but the eye is very flat. If you look at your eye in a mirror you will see that the eyelids throw shadows on the white of the eye and light enters and leaves the eye creating more difference in tonal value. If you do these tweaky things you'll find your eye becomes more round and lifelike.

Now, thinking in colour...what colour would you use to describe anger....fear...violence...happiness? with these answers in mind, think about how you can use these colours to enhance your panels.

You are off to a great start. Keep it going!

pampe
01-07-2006, 06:42 PM
I agree with grunge

really interesting concept and design

Additional aspects might make it MUCH more exciting

larryv048
01-07-2006, 10:53 PM
I also agree with grunge...you certainly got my attention....keep painting!