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11-02-2005, 06:52 PM
:cool: Hello all...

I was directed here for critique on my website. It is:


Please take a peek and offer up any suggestions you may have concerning my pages. I will do the same with others on here. I did not realize this area existed!

Thanks a lot!


11-03-2005, 01:48 AM
Hi Jennifer.

I think it looks good and loads quickly. There are only two things that I would suggest and one is to center it on the page (but even that isn't a biggie) and to make your email link clickable.

Other than that, I don't know if you're going to sell from your site but I didn't see anything that links to a way to buy.

Great beads and great photos too.

11-03-2005, 07:52 AM
Hi! I think it looks wonderful, although I did have to scroll from side to side.:)

I agree that you need a page to sell some things if you can.

I myself don't make the email clickable, I don't know why. I think I always thought it attracted more SPAM or something.

I love your About Us page, really tells about you and your DH.

A really nice start to your site. Good luck!:D

11-03-2005, 01:28 PM
Thanks so much guys- yes, eventually I will set it up to sell. I have to organize what I have to sell, and what has sold. Some of the items on there have already been sold and are only there as a reflection of my work.

I would like to move the page over- but I created this from a template, so I do not think I can do this. What I think I WILL do is use that edge for some other purpose... maybe some more pics, etc.

Thanks again for your words. It is fun to mess around with this stuff!

11-03-2005, 02:26 PM
Jennifer I really love the purple color pallet you have chosen for the background and text, its very striking and easy to read. The website looks great. I think you should add a sales page at some point too.
It looks great.

11-20-2005, 09:39 PM
Hi! Really a sweet site. Everything seemed to work that I clicked on. I believe all the things that are mentioned are personal choices and may or may not make a difference. As far as when you are ready to sell it will be a wonderful asset to your already great start! Oh, I have to ask... Who is the artist for the picture of the northern lights? It looks just like one that I saw from the University in Fairbanks. Is so, a little thing to say who did the picture would be a good idea. If that is what it says below the photo in a font that is to small for my old eyes to read possibly make it a bit bigger or separate acknowledgment to it. Great colors on your site and such nice work too!