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Granny R
09-22-2005, 02:56 PM
Been working on this iris, reference is my own. It's is a little bit in the ugly stage, having trouble with the gradual shading. I think I may do a greyscale and then continue on. Been doing some scrubbing and hoping not to ruin the paper too much. I have a ways to go yet.

Size is18x24 Arches block

Any comments and suggestions welcome.
Ruth
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/22-Sep-2005/31649-just_peachy.jpg

jaydiva
09-22-2005, 05:12 PM
WOW Ruth, this is already beautiful!!
And I'm in first row too juhuuuu


Juttahttp://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/05-Aug-2005/32313-51j.gif

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/14-Aug-2005/32313-tn.jpg

my new art website (http://www.diva-design.de/JBB/index.htm)

Strider
09-22-2005, 05:41 PM
Looking very good Ruth... Are you going to lift any of the BG darks? :wave:

laudesan
09-22-2005, 08:46 PM
Wow definitely pulling up a chair here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Granny R
09-22-2005, 10:19 PM
Thank you Jutta, Strider and JJ. I did try earlier to have a diffused background with some lighter hues, but it turned into a mess, so voila, dark background resulted. It's looks black on the screen but is really a very dark green. I will post again, when I've done some more shadowy things and brighter colors.
Appreciate your comments, it always helps to inspire me to keep going, when the going gets tough.
Ruth

Granny R
09-23-2005, 12:39 PM
I need some fresh eyes to look at this. Is this working yet? http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/23-Sep-2005/31649-justpeachy2.jpg

Exurban
09-23-2005, 01:12 PM
Hi Ruth! I'm more a landscape person, but I think your composition is so absolutely striking that I have to comment! The touches of violet show up more now, which is lovely. I would have a tendency to strengthen the heart of the flower a bit more, as the background is very dark and could overwhelm the delicacy of the flower. But that's just my opinion!

Granny R
09-23-2005, 01:27 PM
I think your are right, that's what I was looking for, how to strengthen the impact of the flower. Thank you so much for looking and commenting. I will continue on.


Ruth

painterbear
09-24-2005, 05:11 PM
Ruth,

This is really looking wonderful. You've got the petal texture coming along beautifully.

The only place I see that might need a little more definition is where the horizontal petal on the left and the upright petal on the top meet. I don't see any distinction there between them.

I'm up front with Jutta and Kevin, waiting for the finish!

Sylvia

Granny R
09-24-2005, 05:15 PM
Hi Sylvia, I finished it and posted it in the Gallery (http://www.wetcanvas.com/forums/showthread.php?t=296949). You can see the finished painting there.

Ruth