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jan409
07-06-2005, 03:29 PM
I painted this picture this morning about 2 hours. It is painted on a 18x20 canvas. It is from a photo taked by my son while on a road trip along the Northern California coast. Had fun doing it, but also somewhat stressful. Jan

PaulMcD
07-06-2005, 03:43 PM
I really like the detail in wave action in the water and the pink tones in the sky. I think putting a little more of the storm on the right edge would help though.

Wayne Gaudon
07-06-2005, 04:11 PM
nice circular feel to it.

jan409
07-06-2005, 04:31 PM
Paul: Thank you for your thoughts, I had much more storm at first, then thought it was too much. Maybe I removed to much of the storm. jan

Wayne: Thank you for your thoughts. I enjoyed this painting. Jan

D.G.K.King
07-06-2005, 04:33 PM
Hi Jan
Great sense of movement.

jan409
07-06-2005, 06:36 PM
Hello Dave:

Thank you for looking and responding to my work. I love your work and am so glad I hear from you about my work. Jan

Lady Carol
07-06-2005, 07:41 PM
The sea under the storm just needs to be a little darker. This is fabulously ominous though

3chaway9
07-06-2005, 08:03 PM
Hi Jan,
i agree with Dave... the greens of the sea merging into the blue are cool.

jan409
07-06-2005, 09:33 PM
thank you, I have not done many seascapes. but I love to try. I will try more. Dave your work is an insporation, and caroline, I love to hear from you. You are so good for the soul. Plus you have a great style. jan

jan409
07-06-2005, 09:38 PM
Carol You are right, It does need more darks in the area of the storm. I felt an imbalance in the painting, I thought it was in the clouds, but now i think it is in the water. thank you Jan