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flurpy
06-27-2005, 04:20 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/06-27-2005/63970_nude_hair_brush_web.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: WIP - naked lady brushing hair
Year Created: 2005
Medium: Oil
Surface: Board
Dimension: 3ft x 2ft
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Started this, but got stuck with the frame,
background (white walls) and wooden chair.

I'm doubting if the composition will work.
The reference pic had a very solid gold picture frame, and I cannot get it right without distracting the attention.
Poor reference photo, and I wish to simplify it, but not sure how

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Any ideas on what to paint to make the pic seem less "empty".

Any other criticism welcome.

(Apologies if wrong forum - the WIP forum wont give me the option to post like this forum, or I keep missing where to click)

artbabe21
06-27-2005, 07:47 PM
welcome to WC and the OC forum flurpy :wave:...I'll be glad to move this over to the WIP forum. No, you don't get this forum over there, just post a thread withthe pertinent information.

pampe
07-12-2005, 01:43 PM
I like the concept a lot...very clever

I think the composition...though very heavy on the right will work if you pump up the values on the woman

Pam

siraven
09-23-2005, 02:53 PM
with more detail it'll be a great finished painting... i like the fact that the painting in the background copies the woman in the foreground very much... keep going.