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05-16-2005, 05:16 PM
Charcaol interpretation of a Archibald J Motley Jr. painting

05-17-2005, 07:54 AM
You have a nice loose drawing style......do you intend to develop the drawing further or is this a study for a painting?
cheers kim

05-18-2005, 09:52 AM
......thank you for the reply....I had only done this as an exercise, to inspire me too draw more. what comments would have to further develope the drawing.

05-19-2005, 11:49 AM
Hello to a very new poster and thanks so much for favouring us with your work. :wave:

I find that his mouth appears a little vague and in need of defining. It seems to draw my attention straight to it with a question mark. My mind seems to require that I decipher what is or isn't happening there before I can move on and that stops me from enjoying the rest of the piece.

Cheers and thanks again, Dianna

05-19-2005, 12:09 PM
....Thank you for your post.... I revisited the work…..your input was very helpful …. I can now see refining the mouth is needed……this was exactly the kind of information I was hoping to gain… thanks again.